The Trail of the Hawk: A Comedy of the Seriousness of Life — Text and Context
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Carl was second-generation Norwegian; American-born, American in speech, American in appearance, save for his flaxen hair and china-blue eyes; and, thanks to the flag-decked public school, overwhelmingly American in tradition. When he was born the "typical Americans" of earlier stocks had moved to city palaces or were marooned on run-down farms. It was Carl Ericson, not a Trowbridge or a Stuyvesant or a Lee or a Grant, who was the "typical American" of his period. It was for him to carry on the American destiny of extending the Western horizon; his to restore the wintry Pilgrim virtues and the exuberant, October, partridge-drumming days of Daniel Boone; then to add, in his own or another generation, new American aspirations for beauty.
They are the New Yankees, these Scandinavians of Wisconsin and Minnesota and the Dakotas, with a human breed that can grow, and a thousand miles to grow in. The foreign-born parents, when they first come to the Northern Middlewest, huddle in unpainted farm-houses with grassless dooryards and fly-zizzing kitchens and smelly dairies, set on treeless, shadeless, unsoftened leagues of prairie or bunched in new clearings ragged with small stumps. The first generation are alien and forlorn. The echoing fjords of Trondhjem and the moors of Finmark have clipped their imaginations, silenced their laughter, hidden with ice their real tenderness. In America they go sedulously to the bare Lutheran church and frequently drink ninety-per-cent. alcohol. They are also heroes, and have been the makers of a new land, from the days of Indian raids and ox-teams and hillside dug-outs to now, repeating in their patient hewing the history of the Western Reserve.... In one generation or even in one decade they emerge from the desolation of being foreigners. They, and the Germans, pay Yankee mortgages with blood and sweat. They swiftly master politics, voting for honesty rather than for hand-shakes; they make keen, scrupulously honest business deals; send their children to school; accumulate land--one section, two sections--or move to town to keep shop and ply skilled tools; become Methodists and Congregationalists; are neighborly with Yankee manufacturers and doctors and teachers; and in one generation, or less, are completely American.
So was it with Carl Ericson. His carpenter father had come from Norway, by way of steerage and a farm in Wisconsin, changing his name from Ericsen. Ericson senior owned his cottage and, though he still said, "Aye ban going," he talked as naturally of his own American tariff and his own Norwegian-American Governor as though he had five generations of Connecticut or Virginia ancestry.
Now, it was Carl's to go on, to seek the flowering.
Unconscious that he was the heir-apparent of the age, but decidedly conscious that the woodshed was dark, Carl finished the pile.
From the step of the woodshed he regarded the world with plaintive boredom.
"Ir-r-r-r-rving!" he called.
No answer from Irving, the next-door boy.
The village was rustlingly quiet. Carl skipped slowly and unhappily to the group of box-elders beside the workshop and stuck his finger-nails into the cobwebby crevices of the black bark. He made overtures for company on any terms to a hop-robin, a woolly worm, and a large blue fly, but they all scorned his advances, and when he yelled an ingratiating invitation to a passing dog it seemed to swallow its tail and ears as it galloped off. No one else appeared.
Before the kitchen window he quavered:
In the kitchen, the muffled pounding of a sad-iron upon the padded ironing-board.
Mrs. Ericson's whitey-yellow hair, pale eyes, and small nervous features were shadowed behind the cotton fly-screen.
"I haven't got noth-ing to do-o."
"I piled piles of it."
"Then you can go and play."
"Then play some more."
"I ain't got nobody to play with."
"Then find somebody. But don't you step vun step out of this yard."
"I don't see _why_ I can't go outa the yard!"
Again the sound of the sad-iron.
Carl invented a game in which he was to run in circles, but not step on the grass; he made the tenth inspection that day of the drying hazelnuts whose husks were turning to seal-brown on the woodshed roof; he hunted for a good new bottle to throw at Irving Lamb's barn; he mended his sling-shot; he perched on a sawbuck and watched the street. Nothing passed, nothing made an interesting rattling, except one democrat wagon.
From over the water another gun-shot murmured of distant hazards.
Carl jumped down from the sawbuck and marched deliberately out of the yard, along Oak Street toward The Hill, the smart section of Joralemon, where live in exclusive state five large houses that get painted nearly every year.
Sinclair Lewis's The Trail of the Hawk: A Comedy of the Seriousness of Life opens with a boy named Carl Ericson in a woodshed, kicking wood and dreaming of soldierly adventure. The scene is deliberately mundane—a back-yard boy in a baggy jacket, his face dirty, his hair tangled—yet the prose already hints at the restlessness that will drive the narrative. The novel moves through distinct phases: small-town boyhood, college, aviation training, and long-distance flight competitions. Its structure is episodic, with each part marked by a shift in setting and ambition. The excerpts show a work that juxtaposes the provincial world of Joralemon, Minnesota, with the emerging technology of flight, and that experiments with form by incorporating diary entries and letters.
From Woodshed to Cockpit: The Arc of Restlessness
The opening chapter establishes a pattern of confinement and escape. Carl is punished by being made to pile wood, but his mind is elsewhere: he imagines himself a soldier of fortune, and the sticks of wood become "personal enemies." This tension between domestic obligation and the desire for adventure recurs throughout the excerpts. The novel's three-part structure—"The Adventure of Youth," a middle section, and a final part—mirrors Carl's progression from boyhood mischief to professional aviation. The transition is not smooth; the excerpts show him as a young man still grappling with shyness and self-doubt, even as he prepares for a transcontinental race. The movement between scenes is often abrupt, as if the narrative itself is impatient to reach the next horizon.
The Diary as a Window into Interiority
In the later excerpts, the narrative shifts to diary entries written by Carl (or "Mr. Ericson"). This formal change allows for a more intimate, fragmented voice. The diary records his thoughts on flying, his encounters with reporters, and his reflections on socialism and class. One entry notes, "I do know that most governments, maybe all, permit most children to never have a chance." The diary also includes letters and mentions of a woman named Gertie, who is involved with a Village Improvement Committee. The juxtaposition of high-altitude flying and small-town committee work underscores the novel's interest in contrasting scales of experience. The diary form also introduces a self-consciousness about writing itself: Carl comments on his spelling and his awkwardness at social events.
Recurring Images: Flight, Confinement, and the Gaze
Several images recur across the excerpts. The woodshed of the opening is a space of confinement, much like the "musty" shed where Carl is punished. Later, the cockpit of an airplane becomes a space of both freedom and vulnerability. The diary describes flying over a military post and feeling watched: "What seemed more than a million pretty girls kept dodging out of doorways and making snapshots of me." The gaze of others—whether the rooster in the yard or the crowd at a reception—is a constant presence. The novel also returns to the idea of the "trail" or path, from the title to Carl's planned flight route: Chicago to St. Louis to Indianapolis, and so on. This linear movement is undercut by the diary's digressions and the narrator's tendency to look back.
The Comedy of Seriousness: Tone and Ambition
The subtitle, "A Comedy of the Seriousness of Life," signals a tonal duality that the excerpts bear out. Carl's diary entries are earnest—he worries about the future, about social inequality, about his own adequacy—but they are also punctuated by self-deprecating humor. He calls his flying garments "not clothes but garments, by heck!" and records a friend's absurd ambition to buy two razor-strops. The novel's comedy arises from the gap between grand aspirations and mundane realities. The excerpts do not reveal whether Carl wins the race or finds fulfillment, but they establish a pattern: each new setting brings a fresh set of constraints and possibilities. The reader is left to watch how this restless protagonist navigates the serious business of living.
The excerpts from The Trail of the Hawk offer a fragmented but revealing portrait of a young man in motion. Readers attentive to structure will note how the novel shifts between third-person narration and first-person diary, between the claustrophobic woodshed and the open sky. The recurring images of confinement and flight, of being watched and watching, give the work a cohesive texture despite its episodic plot. This edition preserves the original text, including the incomplete sentence on page 212 noted by the transcriber, which stands as a small reminder of the material history of the book.
Some evenings I think of The Trail of the Hawk, that diary’s quiet listening within all the noise—how even flights need a place to land. It reminds me of another old friend, Heart of the Blue Ridge — A Reader’s Guide, whose hills hold the same patient hush, as if both worlds simply wait for someone to sit a while.
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